Obesity: A Dangerous Disease
There are many things which affect human lives, such as obesity. If someone has obesity and he has never been sick, this does not mean he will stay in good health for many years .Or he may not have any health problems and live happy life. But, obesity has become a growing problem or in the United States of America and the whole world. For example, According to (NCHS Health). the statistics of obesity in America is indicating that an estimated 32.7 percent of U.S. adults 20 years and older are overweight, 34.3 percent are obese and 5.9 percent are extremely obese. Popular opinion said that obesity is a genetic thing, which came from our parents and grandparents for a long time, But the truth is that obesity came from cultural attitudes that we thought it is genetic so it can not be stopped. Obesity has incredible side effects facts.
1 comments:
Mashari,
This is a really good start to your introduction. As you keep working, perhaps you could add more details regarding which diseases obesity can cause.
Also, remember that your sources only go in parentheses when they are at the end of a sentence. For example: "as dfa s d f as df asd sdfs" (Taylor 90). or, you can paraphrase a source and use parenthesis at the end like this (Taylor 90).
See you in class this afternoon,
Ben
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